My first working day in HCP 53 days left
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Today was my first day to work in HCP Pump Manufacturer Corporation.
It is one of the best companies in pump manufacturing industry in Taiwan. I am very pleased to have the chance to work there. Its high-quailty products have won it an excellent reputation around the world. Don't get me wrong. I am not doing commercial for my company. I am just telling the truth! Even if I am hired as a contractor in one future year, I will still do my best in my position to be an good assistant in my department, handling international businesses, hoping I can become a full-time worker at this time next year. This company gave me an unique feeling at the first time I met its interviewer. The interview made me feel that it must be a well-organized company. It is worth working in it beacuse of its favorable systems, good working environment, and wonderful fringe benefits. All of these excellent working conditions have made HCP's workers envied by many. I am really lucky to get hired now because my supervisor said the company is working on expanding its overseas markets. That means if anyone works hard to follow the company's growth, he will have more oppotunities to succeed in his career. This also explains the reason why many new employees are needed for the its growth instead of replacing workers who get laid off. Today was just for a warm-up. A tight schedule to learn more about all kinds of products is waiting for me for next few weeks. So, wish me luck!
1 個意見:
Hi Tom; I hope you will be successful in your new career. In case of English, I can see some "complex sentences", which is a significant improvement.
line14) Hoping... is a "subordinate clause" which is incomplete and it should be linked to the "main clause". if you replace "." (before Hoping) with "," the problem will be solved. :D
liny24) luck-->lucky
line31) "the" should be omitted
I assume you can make your writings even better, using complex and compound structure. so take a look at some grammar book. I am sure you can figure it out! Good Luck
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